Well Mr and Mrs Matlock, you've sure created a stir in blogland this day...200 words? And romance too?
Hummmm....
The night was hot and steamy. Arizona during the Monsoon season is unbearable.
It's finally Friday. I knew when I got home, and after a cool shower, I was going to Cooper's as soon as I could for a cool drink. I loved the atmosphere, the music, the possibilities...
A quick look in the mirror brought an approving smile. Makeup applied, flirty little top with just the slightest hint of what could come later, tight white pants and long blond hair hanging sensually to my waist. Sexy sandals, painted nails, all the right jewels.
As I sat at the bar, I felt them. Eyes drinking me in like a tall glass of Harvey Wallbanger after a good steamy night of sweet release.
When I turned around I was startled to meet a green eyed gaze...
After a couple of drinks and small talk, he asked me to dance. Just the feel of him so close made me melt. His caressing voice, his magic hands, his.....
The claws dug in deeper, the sweaty hermaphrodite loins pressed nearer and the slimy swamp breath brought a wrenching scream from my open lips.
I flew off the bed into a sobbing heap.
These nightmares are getting too freaky...
No more late night CHOCOLATE!
PS...Hey PJ.... :P
Keep Smilin :)
16 comments:
Oh you You really had me going there you tease you!!(if you see what I mean!)
No pun intended but I like it so I'm not trashing it.
You had me at Harvey Wallbanger! The rest was just icing on this delicious cake.
Hey PJ, batter up!
Ok you too, this is getting ridiculously fun! But I thought PJ didn't want to continue this one ;-) LOL.
Perhaps even better than this delicious tale would be if you divulged the e-mail you will be receiving from PJ shortly now that you've challenged her.
Loved it Vicki! Really awesome. I'm thinking HR might be knocking on your door for this work of art!
Thanks for linking up. I am having such a fun Saturday morning. It's too miserable to do anything outside today (monsoon indeed) so I'm just staying inside loving these links!
Gauntlet thrown! You really turned this one upside down. I'm laughing my head off over here. I am (yes I'll admit it) loving this week's challenge! Kat
That was REALLY funny! I am laughing so loud, I'm giving myself a headache. Never saw it coming....
You are so twisted!!
heehee
no.
HAHAAHAHA
And a snort, to boot.
=D
AHAHAHAHAHA!!! A PJ-inspired ending, I see! This was fantastically written, and hilarious to boot. :)
I liked it in the bar and want to go back! :)
oh my goodness. You are a tease! That was very clever.
That was good thoughtyou wre part of the twilight film
OMG, I was LOL at the tall glass of Harvey Wallbanger. Great job Vicki.
Awesome! This story had it all! If you turned this into a movie, what type would it be? A romantic comedy/horror/drama? Very well done!
Hermaphrodite!? You did have too much chocolate...Funny, well done :-) Peace
You had me going! I love that it was a dream, and I love the way you pulled me in to that spectacular ending. Bravo!
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