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7/18/10

CHANGE in a BOTTLE...CENTUS #11

I'm participating in Saturday Centus,
hosted by JENNY MATLOCK  Visit her to see how others formed a short story from this weeks prompt...which is in blue.
This week I'm collaborating with PJ over at Seens From The Backs Of My Eyelids
 This is my continuation of her story....



Melissa has the same attitude her mother did at that age.

The next paper was Sean's.

" We're suppose to write about rainbows. But that just makes me think about thunder and lightning and rain and mud and pushing people in it. Stupid rainbows are for girls."

He sounds just like his dad, the obnoxious bully.

Another sip of tea awakened memories of being that age herself.

Growing up in this same town, wanting to be popular, and what the three of them did to achieve that goal.

Sandy's favorite song then was "Somewhere Over The Rainbow." That's how they came up with the idea...






Keep Smilin (o:

11 comments:

Sue said...

Here we go....

Can't wait to read PJ's continuation. You guys are quite the team.

Great job!

=)

Viki said...

I liked it. I hope you two continue writing about the kids papers. I guess I'll see, ha. Great job.

Cheryl said...

This was unexpected. And welcome!

Kat said...

Yippee! I was afraid that y'all weren't doing the tag team thing this week. Can't wait to see how this unfolds. But teachers have ALOT of material to draw from. Kat

Tgoette said...

Ah, here it comes, the dramatic shift in the story! I'm on the edge of my seat here, Vicki! Great job!

cj Schlottman said...

You and PJ are a great tag team. I loved the tone of this piece, "Stupid rainbows are for girls."

Waiting for the next installment!

Thanks,..........cj

PⒿ @ $ € € ₦$ ₣®0₥... said...

You seemed to want to turn the car....and I seemed to want to turn it back.....and now you will probably flip the car all the way over....I know how your mind works..... :)

jeff campbell said...

Teacher therapy ;-) Nice continuation...puts me into the mindset...Peace and blessings

Tina said...

AWESOME!!! I, too, am loving your collaboration with PJ. Way to go!

Malisa said...

Small towns and popularity are a dangerous combination! Isn't it true how one can see the parent's traits and prejudices in the words and actions of their children? Enjoyable read!

I just posted my contribution for the week. Hope you will join me at my blog!

Malisa

Jenny said...

Here we go...the stories rolling. Can't wait to see where it ends up!