I'm participating in Saturday Centus,
hosted by JENNY MATLOCK Visit her to see how others formed a short story from this weeks prompt...which is in blue.
hosted by JENNY MATLOCK Visit her to see how others formed a short story from this weeks prompt...which is in blue.
This is the continuation of our story....
Chapter 1 (PJ)
Charlotte hummed “Somewhere Over the Rainbow” as she sat down to grade her students’ papers.
Their assignment had been rainbows. Charlotte left essay topics open for the kids; she never wanted to stifle creativity.
Melissa’s paper was first. “Rainbows are pretty and they have all the colors except not as many as my crayon box at home. In real life you can see straight through a rainbow to the other side not like the rainbows in stores and I don’t know why that is. Real life rainbows are too big to fit in stores.”
Charlotte chuckled and sipped her tea.
Chapter 2 (Vicki)
Melissa has the same attitude her mother did at that age.
The next paper was Sean's.
" We're suppose to write about rainbows. But that just makes me think about thunder and lightning and rain and mud and pushing people in it. Stupid rainbows are for girls."
He sounds just like his dad, the obnoxious bully.
Another sip of tea awakened memories of being that age herself.
Growing up in this same town, wanting to be popular, and what the three of them did to achieve that goal.
Sandy's favorite song then was "Somewhere Over The Rainbow." That's how they came up with the idea...
Chapter 3 (PJ)
Charlotte inhaled deeply, shaking her head…"Somewhere Over The Rainbow", indeed. Robert’s paper was next.
“Rainbows remind me of different stuff all added up to make something better like all the colors are nice alone but they look really cool right next to each other. That could work for people too if they would do what we do. Everyone is a different color like me and Tony and Becca and Carlos and it’s more fun together on the playground than when I’m alone and there’s nothing to do.”
“Ah,” thought Charlotte, “an eight year old who sees a big picture…”
Chapter 4 (Vicki)
Drifting thoughts...
Of a hot summer night with nothing to do.
Unwanted memories came, again taking her to that place hidden in the dusty back roads of her mind; kicking rocks as they walked down that lane to the old house choked with ancient cobwebs.
They were the same age as the kids she was trying to steer through this life. Except Sandy. She was a year older.
Why did they think playing silly games were just for fun; never seeing the big picture, the fallout?
Echos of "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" haunted her.
Shaking the thoughts away, she began to read Amber's paper.
Keep smilin(o:
5 comments:
I LOVED "choked with cobwebs"! Nice job, partner! Thanks for leaving me with Amber's paper. I think I can manage that.
Another winner! Loved #4.
Uh oh! Somebody's got a secret! Can't wait to hear it!
Malisa
Secrets and rainbows. For some reason that statement made me think of our little Granddaughter Morgan. She would probably shout - "a unicorn! A Unicorn! The secret is a unicorn!"
I suspect it might not be, though.
Unwanted memories, they do haunt all of us. The seque from the child's point of view to the adult's was seamless. I Love this game of literary leap-frog you two are playing!
..........cj
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