Visit her to see how others formed a short story from this weeks prompt, which is in blue here. This is what I've done with it....
Will we remember it all? It's so magical.
We've listened as Elphaba tells about the crazy things that can happen, dumb things we do, mistakes we'll make.
She says "It's imperative that you keep the number of take offs equal to the number of landings. And try to stay in the middle of the air. Do not go near the edges!"
Mercy leans over my shoulder and says "Did you notice Elizabeth in class this morning and how forlorn she seemed?" Perhaps I will write her a comforting note, I thought.
Yet my thoughts linger on what we'll attempt tonight. Our time will be here soon.
We all look up when Elphaba says "You, you and you.....Panic! The rest come with me..."
Watch for a continuation....
Keep smilin (o:
9 comments:
This was one of your best thus far, Jake! I love the part about staying in the middle of the air.......
a bewitching tale....
Love it! What a fun use of the prompt! This is indeed magical. Kathy
I'm sooo confused lol. I guess the other one wasn't the continuation one. Oh well, I like the way this one is starting.
"It's imperative that you keep the number of take offs equal to the number of landings.... I love that line in this mysterious little piece. Can't wait for next week!
Loving these. How you manage to take whatever we're given and fit it into your big story arc is truly amazing. And I know I said that last week, but it's still true!
oh i wonder what is being attempted tonight, and a time for what to come? interesting :)
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Please do follow up...such intrigue should not go unfinished...Peace and blessings
Wow. I loved this story. So intriquing and unusual. And I'm really wondering what is going to happen.
Looking forward to the next installment.
And always looking forward to seeing your posts.
You are really neat!
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